Wednesday, February 27, 2013

FINAL Student Initiated Blog

Dolan:
http://www.dolansblog1.blogspot.com

Tanner:
http://www.tannergiles1395.blogspot.com

Jorge:
http://www.jorgesblogg.blogspot.com

Quinn: Quinn's blog is not working so please post to the comment section below.
For my censorship project I am reading the outsiders. The book is about a fourteen year old boy who just lost both of his parents in a car accident and is living with his two older brothers. Ponyboy is known as a poor kid from the rough side of town. How would you handle the loss of both of your parents with no one to comfort you?

Thursday, February 7, 2013

Student Initiated Blog: February 7th

Alissa:
http://alissakt.blogspot.com

Sarahy:
http://sarahymedrano.blogspot.com

Amanda:
http://amandakolander.blogspot.com

Stephanie:
Stephanie's blog is not working so I've posted her question below. To comment to her post use the comments link on my blog post. Thanks.

Honey, Baby, Sweetheart by Deb Caletti.
Ruby McQueen is a sixteen year old girl who is in love with Travis. Ruby knows he’s a bad influence. He has shown it numerous times and Ruby realized she doesn’t want anything to do with him. She joins her mother’s book club to keep busy and stay away from Travis. In the book club they talk about love books. The book club actually knows the author of one of the books. He writes about how he wants to be with his long lost lover, but she’s in the nursing home and in critical care. So the book club decides to kidnap her and take her to California to her long lost lover. The woman in the nursing home is ok with this and wants to go as well, but can’t do it on her own. Would you ever take the risk of kidnapping the lady from the nursing home to her long lost lover? Do you think they can get away with it?

Tuesday, January 29, 2013

Student Blog #3: January 28-Feb. 1

*Just a reminder that your blogs (journals) are an extension of the classroom and are graded with the same expections. Challenge yourself to really write....details, description, thoughts that are supported with anecdotal evidence or examples from the books that you are reading. And, please, please, proofread and work on sentence fluency!

Thank you for doing your very best job!
Mrs. Eben

Shyla:
http://ShyShy19952013.blogspot.com

Caleb:
http://caleblenort.blogspot.com

Donivan
http://Millerdonivan.blogspot.com

Sammi
http://sammiparadis.blogspot.com

Wednesday, January 16, 2013

Reading Response Journal #1: Jan. 17th

Key Points to Remember When Writing your Reading Responses
  1. Provide a thesis statement for your RR in the first sentence or two.
  2. Weave short relevant quotations into your sentences to support your thesis.
  3. Provide enough context from the novel so readers understand.
  4. Provide the page number after the quotation. Example: ". . . reading" (49).
  5. Word choice is important.
  6. Avoid "you" and eliminate phrases such as "I think," or "I believe," and "What I got out of this was."
  7. Spell correctly and check your grammar.  
  8. Avoid cliches or overused sayings as you write your responses.
A tip to make your writing sound more energetic: minimize the use of the verb "to be" in the forms of "is," "was," or "are." This will force you to use more active verbs. For example, instead of saying, "Charlotte is a spider who weaves incredible webs," say "Charlotte the spider weaves incredible webs." Instead of saying "Taran is a curious and impatient young man. That is why he had to learn his lessons the hard way," you could say "Taran’s curiosity and impatience cause him to learn many lessons the hard way."